Monday, April 6, 2009

Long gone are those days…..

Seven years…. Seven long years…
How do you take it, was it long or just…
However it may be to you..
It has to be a reminiscence…

I look back to those days… those old days infact…
When we first met, and you turned back,
While drifting away with the northern wind..
How could I forget those eyes, shining crystals,
And I could read it even though…

And then it was moreover a habit
We fell in love, gradually…
We made it each other to live long…
But then I forgot, we had grown up…

And now that our time has come and gone..
The pages of life we cant turn back,
We have to separate now as two souls , but a heart,

Tell me my love, would you be able to do so,
I wouldn’t be , in my farthest of dreams
But it has happened now , and I can only exclaim
Long gone are those days…!!!

5 comments:

  1. shhooooo edil motham sentiments anallo ssaaarrraaaa

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  2. nice to read what u have written ...
    i don't no what 2 say..
    but wen i read dis , i remembered some lines which i written long back ..(in my mind,it was not written on paper, i m lazy to write on paper).it goes like this..

    i remember seven long years back,how mad i was to just get a glimpse of u,
    how i would wait for hours just to see a smile of yours for that would make my day,
    how i would weep silently during the dark cold nites thinking i would not get you,
    seven long years was not something short...
    but then i forgot,i guess i had grown up..
    even today i see you,but no more longing do i have for that bright smile...
    your twinkling eyes don't attract me anymore..
    i guess i had grown up after seven years,seven long years of ....????

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  3. Fasmi... thanks a lot, for commenting and that too in this way...
    i like the wordings, kept it very simple... congrats, keep writing more.. once again thanks for commenting on my blog...

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  4. Nice work bro..

    Keep going until u fall down

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  5. Shahi... i ddnt get that last phrase... fall down..? but why..?

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